Sunday, October 30, 2016

Who Am I...? Comments

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Who know me?
I ask t'will nocturnal does flee.
Diurnal I wake my slumber,
And my ear hears a clamour.
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Randhir kaur
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Ramona Gerry 22 December 2016

Beautiful vivid lines dear poet :)

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Siddartha Montik 22 December 2016

and so vivid in the Questions! Most often the shout goes in winds! Our Minds are our Temples! ! if we make them as! ! Nice write thank you for sharing. 10+++! ! !

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Jaya Das 20 December 2016

Beautiful lines penned here dear poet....even this is a question that keeps on pounding my heart too.....so relatable Thanks for sharing :)

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Siddartha Montik 19 December 2016

thus everyday I ring your bells. Lovely Lines you dear Poet! ! ! Thank you for sharing the Thoughts! 10+++! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 November 2016

With many questions than answers. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anil Pillai 04 November 2016

Wonderful...amazing lines....loved reading it

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Randhir Kaur 31 October 2016

Dear Mahakul Sir and Robert Smith thank you so much for the kind words. I am glad that you enjoyed. Sir Robert I will surely throw my view on your write shortly. Respect.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2016

Ear hears a clamour. During complex condition very often mind wanders and a person searches for identity. Concentrating in self and connecting God solve our problems. A philosophical poem this is....10

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