Wednesday, July 8, 2015

Who Am I? Comments

Rating: 4.5

I am desert where nothing grows
Those that i keep if not by heat
Of thirst they die
And the cold night wind blows sand over them
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Abdalla Juma Shenga
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Kinyua Karanja 09 July 2015

There is a special element of symbolic and imagery drawn in this poem. It doesn't necessarily refers to actual desert but more social meaning can learnt. Good work.

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Kelly Kurt 08 July 2015

A very well thought out and written poem, Abdalla. Peace

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Dedan Onyango 08 July 2015

The use of the symbolic language gives your poem a smooth and flowering taste that brings out the message home. thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 July 2015

Faint hearts despair! Nice work.

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Abdalla Juma Shenga

Abdalla Juma Shenga

Mombasa, Kenya
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