Wednesday, May 30, 2012

Who Am I? Comments

Rating: 4.6

Let me put the words
What I feel atleast
This moment for thee…
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swetha vankayalapati
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Johnathan Juarez 19 December 2012

love the personality of this. This went on my favorite poems list

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 13 July 2012

I'm genuinely impressed by the way you tend your words. A v.much cherished piece of yours. I loved it

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 23 June 2012

Brilliant poem Swetha, your wording is superb and the is just fantastic...well penned poem...keep it up. Siya_! !

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 17 June 2012

Swetha vvr, 'He is... what he says he is not..! Shall we take the same in your case? but do not keep the under the face and then close his eyes...Hard to imagine..Any way I enjoy reading your poems. Good Luck to you.

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Praneeth Remidi 09 June 2012

nice lines Swetha, emotions nicely lined.....

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oh! very classic! ! ! so marvelous, thank you for sharing this one The_African_Son

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 06 June 2012

hmm smooth nicely done, keep up. lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 04 June 2012

Nice work.....keep it up dear....+

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Indira Babbellapati 04 June 2012

keep writing... writing gets better with each attempt.

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Renu Kakkar 04 June 2012

I sense depth of feelings behind the words strung into a poem. good write

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 04 June 2012

a lovely write.....................full of images......keep it up

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Vishnu Gupta 04 June 2012

great poem, , , well use of words, , wishing u best fr future..!

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Dave Walker 03 June 2012

A really great poem, like it, a great write.

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Subodh Pandey 03 June 2012

A lovely write sweta

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Johnathan Juarez 30 May 2012

this put a smile on my face. thanks lovely poem

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Joseph Poewhit 30 May 2012

Deep feelings behind the words

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