Wednesday, May 30, 2012

Who Am I? Comments

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I'am the son without the dad
I'am the boy who goes through the bad
I'am the guy who cant succeed in life
I'am the old man who has no wife
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Jacob Guinn
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Clinton Ekeh 05 June 2012

Son, don't know if you have ever heard about Jesus Christ... Only and only in him would you ever discover your true identity. Without Him, you will forever be a familiar stranger to yourself... Who Am I? - I am Christ's(1Corinthians 3: 23)

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Indira Babbellapati 30 May 2012

the journey within begins with the question 'who am i? ' and the answer keeps changing as one 'grows' and writing poetry is an inward journey! go on, young man! best, indira

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Sajna Kailas 30 May 2012

nice poem. loved its writing style. you are great! ! !

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Elena Sandu 30 May 2012

Wonderful written, I know of many who get old and still don't not known who they are. I also don't know who am I or what I am. I admire your self knowledge, loved this poem. Thank you for share,10.

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Jacob Guinn

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