Friday, August 11, 2006

Who Am I Comments

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I never thought
To be like this
For me
Things were
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Berhan Mehari
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Isaias Yemane 07 November 2006

Well that was a readable piece. I liked the humbleness the narrator shows; liked the twist at the end- 'who am i to deserve all these'. But i would like to disagree with the narrator in the poem in that being called names, beautiful names, does not make one so humble as to deny to hom/herself his identity as a human being- - - who am.......But keep it up Berhan, as they say everyone has stories to tell and od tell us yours.

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Lidia Yeibio 17 August 2006

Nice poem dear. It speaks out a deep feelling so well. Please keep on writting. I'll look forward to see more of them. With care.

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