Monday, January 30, 2012

Who Am I? Comments

Rating: 3.0

I thought I was a son
My life, when had begun
I thought I was the one
When I knew I’d but won
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Rosmin Elsa Mohan
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Romeo Della Valle 28 March 2012

Excellent! Quite a powerful and well crafted poem that clearly gives you away! A reservoir of rich imagery and great rhymes the bring melody to this thought provoking write! You poetic talent is so obvious! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! If you have the time, I would like you to read and I hope you enjoy my poem also with the same title: Who Am I? God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC

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Deep Mukherjee 30 January 2012

The past in me to embalm Those lines on my right palm The myth that blinded the human race In a mirror to see that face............. these lines tell the whole story; unbelievable! ! ! :)

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Rosmin Elsa Mohan

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