Friday, August 12, 2011

***who Am I*** Comments

Rating: 2.8

I am me, a walking talking living human
I, caged in my brain myself in command
Always thinking carried by my train of thoughts,
Stopping at stations of life rebounding with kindness
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Ken e Hall
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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 September 2018

A very nice and cute soliloquy. Thank you so much for sharing. GBU in Abundance, with the very best wishes, Sylvia Frances Chan, dutch poetess, evangelist and world traveler.

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Howard Savage 08 January 2016

As you think in your heart, so are you. profound.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 11 October 2015

I am me, I am free, not so for many In this world with human conflict. Love fills my heart, love is the start For a world of the free, yes, Verily, love frees us from all conflicts and miseries..........10

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Adeline Foster 27 August 2015

Great thoughts coincide. Yet from a poet’s point of view mine may have narrowed down a tad. Read mine – Who Am I – Adeline

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Patricia Grantham 18 August 2015

We are all created as unique individuals. Each of us has a part to play on earth. Then all will come together as one. Good.

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Melvina Germain 11 August 2015

Such a beautiful poem taking one to that place of love and peace. It screams compassion and delves beautifully into equality. That's how I see it, thank you for sharing Ken.....

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Elena Sandu 02 May 2015

Yes! The greatest gift of freedom what else could be than love? Lots of food for thought poem heart and mine opened, thaank you!

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Kelly Kurt 10 April 2015

And for those of us who have nothing material to give, sharing a smile. a hello or any simple act of kindness, can make a difference that will spread. A touching poem, Ken. Thanks for sharing Peace

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* Sunprincess * 26 June 2014

.............this is a great write....and I agree with you....we all should set an example and give to the less fortunate...

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Valsa George 08 May 2014

The great thoughts of a man of noble disposition.. He wishes to see everyone free, feels for the deprived and is willing to do something to ameliorate the conditions of the poor... Great write! !

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Elna Nel 13 August 2012

A loving, sensitive and giving poem, the words are apt to stay with me.

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Sylva Portoian 14 May 2012

Why readers gave you poor marks...! Because they never understood your astrocytes...! Sylva-MD-Poetry

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Walterrean Salley 29 April 2012

Though superior, human beings are a complex creature. It were good if everyone was as fortunate to know their reason, purpose and goal in life. Then we all could work toward a better world. But, many have yet to figure out their own identity, and therefore lack the ability to help others find theirs. “I am me, I am free, not so for many In this world with human conflict.” Unfortunate, but true. Thanks, Ken, for writing this sober piece.

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