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I wish not to be
A Sad guy, who cries at night
The Desperate man, who sees no light
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a very well thoughtful piece..! ! and yea it contains some wonderful wisdome..! ! ! ! ! ! ! ..... i liked it! ! ! ! <3 10+++++++++ form me and a flower @; - keep it up ^^ yours DaNa... ^_^
This poem contains some great wisdom Kurt - - appicable to all eras and especially to todya - - if we keep in mind some of these pointers we wont go far astray - - thanks for the reminders.....10/10 from Fay.
Great writing with rhyming.... I think this piece is a bit philosophical...... needs a cup of coffee and some thinkin' while reading... Great job!
simple yet captivating messages...thanks best regards, jdh