Friday, May 8, 2009

Who Am I? Comments

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Only when the stain of the dust that I crave for
Had fully deprived my dried lips of the ardour
I sought for the water, I writhed and laid down for,
And reflected but plenty, I descried my shape.
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Scarlett Charlotte
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Kurt Behle 08 May 2009

It is pretty much good. you used all the powers and gave it too much meaning. It is too much strong! Well it deserve over 10+

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