Monday, April 6, 2009

Who Am I Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the outside I'm an ordinary teenager. Dark hair Dark eyes
But on the inside who am I?
I'm bright but dimming hot but chilling alive but dying.
I was cold dark and dead but then i found that light ahead.
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James Davis
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Little Hatila ;) 07 April 2009

oh so sad, but if i were you, i would just leave my past behind and start a new life, why should love always hurts that much....be brave and face the reality.....extremely well done, loved it very much....10 Hataw

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Wojja Fink 06 April 2009

seeing the fool is halfway to being wise see mr. resistor. cool observations.........John

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Nangula Immanuel 06 April 2009

Cool stuff! i can relate, love makes you do some pretty dumb stuff. Read one of mine, ' I'm done...'

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