Who Am I Comments

this is Amazing... very very good job. outstanding work done here. ~MC~

a thoughtful piece, thanks for sharing 10

great work ashley. nice idea and that is sweet at all.

A nice piece with nature element and the all times existetialist question. great. Needs some conscious word selection too

a great piece. very thoughtful and deep. keep up the great work

thats a question we all ask at one point its a matter of answering it yourself thats kinda th tricky part but great poem

Good job Keep going You're doing good

A basic question, common to us all. I think I would leave out so many Ands..a habit that I am trying hard to break myself. A period at the end of the line before would serve the same purpose, giving the work less of a 'run-on' feeling. The poem itself, however, is very well done!

Nice work - you have potential indeed. I'd favour leaving off the last line of the last stanza - less is more.

great job. i like it.

beutifully written..... yu have the potential to write more....

It takes a lot of courage to meet oneself frontfaced in life's mirror reflecting truth back.Soul journey can take a lifetime.Enjoy it.A ten for reflective ideas...wonderful poetry freeform.

This was a delightful and joyous thing to read. It was very clear and understandable. Just the kind of writing that attracts the readers. The basic question has been asked by every human who ever walked the earth. And the earth, as you stated, moves on. Just as you must do. The right answer. Bravo! Perfect title, perfect ending. GW62