Monday, August 31, 2009

Who Am I? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Inhaling smoky lead,
Carbonated old lung,
Alcohol burnt liver,
Rotten kidneys cry,
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kafil uddin raihan.
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Catrina Heart 15 September 2009

sometimes its sad and a pity side that we dont know who we are and we are lost in this place..........Thanks for this poignant poem....10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 September 2009

gRRRRRRRReat my dear kafil! 'know thyself' was the motto of socrates! Your power bloomed! 10+

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Sanzida Afrin 02 September 2009

I have read this poem before getting your invitation, before being member, from the chart of latest submitted poems of this site's homepage. Nice one, I have to admit.

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Mubeen Sadhika 02 September 2009

Its a great thought. You've penned it marvelously. Good to read. deserves 10+

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Ejaz Khan 02 September 2009

A nice write Kafil, keep this inquisitive mind in action, doing a great job!

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Carol Gall 02 September 2009

great gives the reader a lot to think on

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Deborah Cromer 02 September 2009

Loud and clear. Detailed and harsh, right up front and to the point. Straight out and saying it like it is. Good points and reality! Great poem. DC

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Obinna Eruchie 01 September 2009

Once a man who was happy and healthy due to non-smoking, is now depressed and unhealthy due to smoking can be likened to Earth once evergreen during ancient times with less technology, is now polluted during modern times with more technology. Very insightful.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 01 September 2009

a good write! interesting thoughts send a wise significance it's important for each one to know who is he, to ask himself about himrself. this world is like a toxic pretty flower, her look is too beautiful but you should be careful when you smell! ! ! 10.

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~ Jon London ~ 01 September 2009

A fine reflection of inner self...filled with questions on life itself..that you place on the reader to reflect upon themselves....a great share piece Kafil...you write from the heart for sure 10

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Surya . 31 August 2009

a citizen of the modern world.naked truth told in a poigant manner.voted10 surya

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Frank Lambert 31 August 2009

Hi Kafil, Good to see you're still writing and asking questions of yourself and others. This is a dark write, feels like you're going through a lot of self analysis. Cheers, Frank

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Beauty Philosophy 31 August 2009

A thoughtful poem and a strong message. You are displaying the so- to -speak signs of civilization and modernity, whereas in reality they are signs of stupidity and unconsciousness...well-penned.10

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Joseph Poewhit 31 August 2009

Paints a questioning picture to think about.

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kafil uddin raihan.

Feni, Bangladesh
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