Who Am I? Comments

sometimes its sad and a pity side that we dont know who we are and we are lost in this place..........Thanks for this poignant poem....10

gRRRRRRRReat my dear kafil! 'know thyself' was the motto of socrates! Your power bloomed! 10+

I have read this poem before getting your invitation, before being member, from the chart of latest submitted poems of this site's homepage. Nice one, I have to admit.

Its a great thought. You've penned it marvelously. Good to read. deserves 10+

A nice write Kafil, keep this inquisitive mind in action, doing a great job!

great gives the reader a lot to think on

Loud and clear. Detailed and harsh, right up front and to the point. Straight out and saying it like it is. Good points and reality! Great poem. DC

Once a man who was happy and healthy due to non-smoking, is now depressed and unhealthy due to smoking can be likened to Earth once evergreen during ancient times with less technology, is now polluted during modern times with more technology. Very insightful.

a good write! interesting thoughts send a wise significance it's important for each one to know who is he, to ask himself about himrself. this world is like a toxic pretty flower, her look is too beautiful but you should be careful when you smell! ! ! 10.

A fine reflection of inner self...filled with questions on life itself..that you place on the reader to reflect upon themselves....a great share piece Kafil...you write from the heart for sure 10

a citizen of the modern world.naked truth told in a poigant manner.voted10 surya

Hi Kafil, Good to see you're still writing and asking questions of yourself and others. This is a dark write, feels like you're going through a lot of self analysis. Cheers, Frank

A thoughtful poem and a strong message. You are displaying the so- to -speak signs of civilization and modernity, whereas in reality they are signs of stupidity and unconsciousness...well-penned.10

Paints a questioning picture to think about.