Saturday, September 20, 2008

Who Am I? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who am I?
So happy but shy
Can I not hide my good deeds
And confess the sins I have committed?
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Who am I? So happy but shy Can I not hide my good deeds And confess the sins I have committed? well timed question? beautiful write.. i love it... well deserved 10 read mine ' I am disgrace and Mary to marry

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 24 September 2008

The best thing about this poem is that it is sincere and true to heart. Thank you.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 September 2008

here words emitting earnest endavour towards truths........10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 September 2008

A marvelous composition. Last two lines are so touchy! 10++

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Ershad Mazumder 22 September 2008

Very good desire.Very simple expression. More than 10 marks for you.

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