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A very deep poem here melvina, on a very dark subject, one in which your emotions run free in your writing, and well written it is too... andy x..10

provocative and unsettling themes in this hard hitting work laced with subtle social commentary...infused with ultimate responsibility. strong work, Melvina! -Tailor

Wow, Melvina. Very poweful and emotional. Not like any of the other things I've read from you. Good work! Sheila

Oooh, pretty savage Melvina, rightly so. The blokes that unleash the dogs dodge and weave dont they. The 3 that started the last one haven't even lost their jobs. We reelected ours. Whats wrong with us?

Strong stuff, Melvina. Powerfully worded and cleverly ended with a loaded question. Very well done. Brian