Wednesday, August 28, 2013

Who? Comments

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Who is there peeping on the branches
waiting for your naive soul
since your childhood
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Poetheart Morgan
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Heather Wilkins 09 September 2013

oh is it not a crow trying to steal your breath good thoughts

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Geetha Jayakumar 09 September 2013

Beautiful words..Sitting over the gold cage hidden a crowned soul....Who is there peeping...Fantastic write with deep meaning..beautifully portrayed.. Loved it...

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Ramesh Rai 29 August 2013

a bright brilliant n beautiful natural sight overwhelm my sub conscious mind.

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Sallam Yassin 28 August 2013

pure your flow pure your lines and glow like burning stars of true

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Sekharan Pookkat 28 August 2013

opaque eyes will never permit to pass light.

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Marcus Mckinley 28 August 2013

the freedom of the bird song (i assume a canary) whether on a branch or in a cage can only be heard when in ear shot. in this poem i believe the song represents the dreams of freedom. the listener being in the cage and the bird outside the window. well done

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