Wednesday, January 21, 2009

Who. Comments

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I am one, one who has power,
One who stands strong, one which will tower.
My place is Olympus, a mighty mountain feared by all,
My hunting bow, that which I call.
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Tohru Frost
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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 March 2019

You are a soul. You are peaceful and courageous. You have unlimited power with you. This is very true. Declaring self courage is very nice. You are definitely a hero. This poem is excellently penned.10

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Sir Bubbles 22 January 2009

I like it! (of course, I am biased toward greek mythology) I suggest trying to keep the syllables in each line a bit more stable, it helps with flow. Then you can make lines stand out by making them longer or shorter.

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Morgan Chartier 21 January 2009

I really liked this one it is very cool

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