Tuesday, October 21, 2008

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who do you think you are? you come in and out of my life
and still think i love you? hell no get away. i hate you. you
think that an apology is going to undo evrything you have
done to me and evrything and everyone around me? hell
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justin walker
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Mimi Fakhira 29 December 2008

Maybe I should back away coz you're on fire in this poem! Wow that was good! You transported your hate into a poem with a blaze. Even if it didn't rhyme it's still good. Check on mine sometime.

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justin walker

justin walker

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