Thursday, August 7, 2008

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I’m a creature, a bird, a lioness alike;
My being a mystery; a mountain, the ocean still be;
And the earth, oh! The earth so full of profusion;
My soul, my spirit; my body, up in the sky thee yearn to be;
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Nkululeko Mdudu 11 August 2008

A fine description of man indeed, A marvelty of imagery and a thoughtfull processing. A well deserved 10+

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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 August 2008

man when besirs by the quest of self yet he get the answers as he leaves the place at finale, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , wonderfully wrought from soul by the imagery of man standing upon the dusts of earth in timre and space, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi 09 August 2008

it is deepened with the understanding of being a human, that it lies beyond the visible but way beneath and i like that. i gave it 10

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