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much better ending than before, good choice of words, good job - heather

A piece of Poetic art for mind. You Slammed that on the poetic table, and my eyes got an appetite for the Poetic menu.

Love the poem Tracie. Just a few things, make sure that you try to end your poems a little better. As i was reading this i found myself locked but when the end came it was a little weak. However it is a great start. Keep writing and i'll keep reading! -Heather