Saturday, May 19, 2018

Who? Comments

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Who would mourn my death?
Who would cherish my breath?
Am gonna reduce to ashes.
So, who would dig and found me rest?
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Sona Khajuria
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Khairul Ahsan 01 June 2018

Yes, true, thanks for the 'Poet's Notes'. Good works remain while the body departs. People appreciate the good works long after the soul is gone. You are in the prime of your life. Do not think of death much, just keep doing good as per the dictates of your conscience. Just a suggestion for editing; please remove the last 'e' from the word 'breathe' in the second line and make it 'breath'.

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Sona Khajuria 05 June 2018

Thankyou Sir.... 😊

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