Who? Poem by Sona Khajuria

Who?

Rating: 3.5


Who would mourn my death?
Who would cherish my breath?
Am gonna reduce to ashes.
So, who would dig and found me rest?
Who?

Saturday, May 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: death,lamentation
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
If you want to be remembered after you are gone...then do something good while you are alive.😊
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 01 June 2018

Yes, true, thanks for the 'Poet's Notes'. Good works remain while the body departs. People appreciate the good works long after the soul is gone. You are in the prime of your life. Do not think of death much, just keep doing good as per the dictates of your conscience. Just a suggestion for editing; please remove the last 'e' from the word 'breathe' in the second line and make it 'breath'.

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Sona Khajuria 05 June 2018

Thankyou Sir.... 😊

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