As the star that fell
Across the night,
Endowments
Fragile as sparkle light,
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Amazing imagery and metaphor….the contrast of cosmic symbolism upon the mundane spinning of our puny earth….. You managed to bring the tumultuous galactic events to life….casting shadows in an eerie dance on every day life….. Old astrologers in the formative years of horoscopy would have wondered and whirled around your poem! Beautiful…. Loved it A tenner :)
Thank you, Saadat. You have an amazing way with words. Your comment sure put a smile on my face.