Monday, August 19, 2013

Whither And Why? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rising to the sky
Falling to the ground
Like a stone
Launched up
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla
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Valsa George 20 August 2013

People suddenly falling from great heights, blazing fire turning into cinders, Green fluttering leaves soon turning yellow and withering.... all these we watch helplessly! There is no relevance for our 'whys' here, in our journey through the rocky terrains! ! Great metaphors! !

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David Wood 20 August 2013

Lovely metaphores used hear about the meaning of life, a good write.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 20 August 2013

though the flavor and the basic idea of this poem is not unique and sparingly applied by other poets here, I still enjoyed reading it, Prof. well done..

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Heather Wilkins 19 August 2013

excellent poem these are questions we all ask but do not get an answer.

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 August 2013

Wow. Wonderful poem..Great message.. Loved it.

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Dave Walker 19 August 2013

Why is one of the first words we learn to speak. A great poem.

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