Saturday, November 30, 2013

Whitewash Comments

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Oh, to wish away the lonely
Set the ambers, to the skies
Free the sparrow, to her singing
Sprinkled light, of fireflies
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Susan Lacovara
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Anthony Burkett 31 January 2014

So bittersweet the remembrance of love's sorrow... what a joy to read your pen... what a longing for the words to be true.

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Muhammad Ali 09 December 2013

as light as meditation. i love these lines. i always love this much no-boundary, no-ego, positive and strong moments of life. flowers... (of the world)

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John Mccullagh 03 December 2013

Perfectly rhymed. You have a good ear for the language

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Susan Lacovara

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