Tuesday, December 6, 2016

White Water Comments

Rating: 2.3

White water rapids, black rocks polish fear.
The plunging sensations,
And the dying falls
The water exploding like shells
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Tom Billsborough
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M Asim Nehal 06 December 2016

All's well that ends well, Inspiring poem..10+

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Tom Billsborough 06 December 2016

That's very kind of you, Mohammed. Yes, the calm after the storm makes it worthwhile.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 December 2016

Control! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Tom Billsborough 06 December 2016

Thanks, Edward. I love your poem today. Must read more tomorrow.

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Tom Billsborough

Tom Billsborough

Preston Lancashire England
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