Tuesday, April 14, 2009

White Wash Comments

Rating: 4.5

i'm disappearing
in a torrent of white.
i'm being washed
and dried.
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Jenna Dandurand
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Serge Kapol 14 April 2009

Covered up by white wash...nice overall image here and a nice comparison to these feelings.

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'white washed'...good phrase to describe somebody's prejudice, lack of tolerance, baseless assumptions; some people look so 'dirty' in others' eyes... washed to be as white as the long white sleeves covering the 'good hands'? I don't know which concept fits best...

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Grace Guintos 14 April 2009

what doy you by your poem white wash? ? ? is it like correction fluid? ? but in the end it doesnt look like its a correction fluid..

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