Saturday, July 11, 2015

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Clear, the screams sent my body into shocks
My hot blood flowed, the adrenaline made tides of it
Boiling sweat rolled down my cheeks into a box,
My body formed - curled, so that my eyes were hid
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Apollo Chatman
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Chinedu Dike 19 July 2015

Terrible nightmare well depicted in the poem. A well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned with good rhyme scheme. A nice one indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 11 July 2015

wonderful poem, Apollo. Thanks for sharing

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