White Tongue Poem by Zyw Zywa

White Tongue

Rating: 4.0


Not the war makes the warrior
but his peace
with the ending

....My gates are open
....energy is flowing in
....my face shines from it

....I live, I don't distract you
....with golden hair, I am
....life, bald and unadorned

Not: I survive with hope
but with inner peace
with the ending

....I don't leave me
....I don't withdraw
....in pain and sorrow

....I let life flow in and out
....I'm standing in the light
....in which we find each other

I am not here as a sick person
but in my hard-fought peace
with the ending

....My chest breathes up and down
....my dear body hurts
....I radiate it

....With hot water I wash
....off flakes and sighs
....and I stretch out, cautiously

Thursday, July 15, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: illness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Chemo --- Qigong = Life energy-mastery --- For Maria Godschalk #118 and Honglin Liu --- Collection 'On living on'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luis A. Estable 15 July 2021

A poem that requires a going through in details, but no space here for that. The first stanza is open to so much I can`t do justice here. Good reading.

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