Sunday, July 18, 2021

White Snakes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hissing day and night
Around the loop of the ear
Crawling and shinning they ignite
At the top of the hair.
...
Read full text

Rameeza Nasim
COMMENTS
Zulfiqar Shah 10 September 2022

I always love the depth of your thoughts Rameeza

1 0 Reply
Jazib Kamalvi 25 July 2021

Oh Yes! So charming snakes. Thank you so much.

0 0 Reply
Belle Wassermeister 20 July 2021

Silver strands make for beautiful hair!

1 0 Reply
Aarzoo Mehek 20 July 2021

Stepping into the space of wisdom thise silver strands reflect a lifetime. Beautiful poem.

1 0 Reply
Sandra Feldman 20 July 2021

How well you write. A pleasure to read and realize the beauty of the words and verses that come together and into the heart, slide

1 0 Reply
M Asim Nehal 18 July 2021

Ha ha ha.....True as we grow old they start to appear from nowhere, reminding us that black days. Great satire,100**********

1 0 Reply
Rameeza Nasim

Rameeza Nasim

Karachi
Close
Error Success