Monday, November 2, 2009

White Rose In Hand (11/2/09) Comments

Rating: 4.5

White rose in hand
Face down on a bed of broken dreams
Her heart sleeps in the epitome of broken dawn
The sun will shine no more
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Kayleigh ....
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Ajmacia Mcqueen 02 November 2009

Thats a Very Beautiful poem

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Gwendalynn Ash 02 November 2009

wow i really like this one...its beautiful...umm on line 7 do u mean 'rain' not 'ran'

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