Wednesday, October 26, 2005

White Rose Comments

Rating: 5.0

Precious life, hers never seemed
Working from dusk till down
For anyone who inquires, with vim
She does every thing and anything in return for nothing
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Konjit Berhane
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And a great gift she gave to him returned as love.Very sad.

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A sad and touching poem. Great work best wishes, Rissa.

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Patricia Gale 22 March 2006

Tender and sad. Nice write. Patricia Gale

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Uriah Hamilton 26 October 2005

awkward in spots but the story is very sensitive and sweet.

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