White Rock Comments
In the middle of nowhere
On the new national highway
Transfixed I stood
With a broken down car
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Woooooow, beautiful sir. Beautifully penned description of wild imagination...simply superb sir as is always...thanks for taking us to those imaginary worlds...
Imagination and description are well penned.Loved reading the poem.
Description of flowery imagination made this poem an excellent read. I loved it. Thank you
Downright original. Who could have thought that the result of a vehicle break down would end up with a little town come alive in a poem. you have so many questions. and answers that make me wonder too. Lovely reading.
Beautiful! Just a name has evoked so much imagination in you! The Sun sprang illusory pools On the unending asphalt tape That fumed and ran further down Into an unknown future.......................... Lovely lines!
Wow! Another wonderfully written tale my friend. I assume you got your car fixed before you wrote this.: -)
Thanks. I had only passed that way. The name of the place caught my fancy.
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8/3/2025 2:52:50 PM # 1.0.0
A wonderful pen picture of a desolate surrounding!