Thursday, July 28, 2022

White Rice Comments

Rating: 4.7

White is for rice and brides - ready to commit.
Whites for ghosts and clouds or even carnations
but it should never, ever, be used for privilege
or worse yet, as poetic inspiration.
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Khairul Ahsan 31 July 2022

'We've beaten the freshman 'imposter syndrome, ' and we're ready to bring sophomore year home - together - no muss, no fuss - I love that for us.' - The poem concludes very nicely. The title is intriguing.

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anais vionet 02 August 2022

Thank you. I liked the name and it fit as well any other I came up with.

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Kim Barney 28 July 2022

Five stars for this preamble to your next big adventure!

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anais vionet 28 July 2022

Thanks Kim

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