Monday, June 9, 2008

White Rabbit Comments

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Your very first toy,
From your very first day,
That forever you will keep,
You hold it so tight,
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Risha : Ahmed 22 July 2008

I must admit it's a very good poem and indeed strong.

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Ihave never wanted to be a (white rabit) so much before in my life, very good writeing.10/10, Another of your poems hopping into my favs.~ love ya~

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