White Poem Comments

‘We are able to become eternal and /We are able of asceticism. ~ Indeed asceticism ~ refraining from worldly pleasures ‘Platonic Love’…into different plane…escalation…rhapsodic… Thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

Better keep myself silent for utterance. Blow your whiteness silently. Apoet.

Making us realize that, Only through love and pain, together, We are able to become eternal and We are able of asceticism........ya it is eternal feeling and we all long for it..it is white that is pure and real....10 read mine....from theday one...teacher's woe

Nice poem with perfect ending and apt title. Few lines are composed brilliantly. Good one.

Well I am thinking about taking out a tooth... Ouch...your poem was poetic and written well

i quote: '' In the absence of words. Your eyes become transparent To the wound of the soul '' that is a very good expression.. i believe that there is a strong link between the eyes and the soul.. and of course 'Love & Pain' can purify us.. i ilke this poem so much.. thanks4sharing! !

i quote: '' In the absence of words. Your eyes become transparent To the wound of the soul '' that is a very good expression.. i believe that there is a strong link between the eyes and the soul.. and of course 'Love & Pain' can purify us.. i ilke this poem so much.. thanks4sharing! !

'Your eyes become transparent / To the wound of the soul, / Where only white descend for love...' it is touching.

Only through love and pain, together, -> sharing sweet&bitter nice. a lovely poem 10 for the sharing

you are so sweet, , and this poem is the coolest ur really talented....

i for one love this poem. the way you write its lovely :)

Together is the keyword