Thursday, July 5, 2012

White Pearls........The Creation Of An Iceburg Comments

Rating: 5.0

Frozen land dissipates with the first titanium crack
Which slowly spreads and widens through Greenland's fair back
Teasing onwards further rips glorious sapphire streams
Mine mind could not create this beauty even in my dreams
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karen sinclair
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Danny Draper 07 July 2012

This is a glorious write. Beautifully descriptive and precise, fractured frozen waste, set free it's child of ice.

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Gillena Cox 06 July 2012

this is a highly animated poem; which ends on a note of finality

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Valerie Dohren 06 July 2012

Wonderful poem and imagery Karen - great write.

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