White Pain Comments

I feel your loss and heartache in every word.....10

The poem poses a problem and ends with a solution! Very nice poem :)

The expression white pain itself is very original. laughter without joy, blank fingertips. your conviction that it will change, and final prayer to God. it is very nice dear pia. God bless you.

a wonderful expression of the pain of self doubt and guilt well written tony

You are so right..... The pain that leaves you numb.... Without hope.... When nothing can possibly be the same again. Yes, that pain is white.

Great poem, very powerful. I liked especially these words: '.........not even my selfpity to protect me.'

great work, well done

great poem.......................

Absolutle an amazing write about pain, and the love you have for God! Awesome poem, I give you a 10 for this. Always, Linda

Your every word sparkles your love for God. That shows your divine heart and loving nature.

Any pain blue or white is enough to make us ponder and recollect.... for without experiencing pain we can not learn that we are human who got varied emotions. Thanks for sharing, top mark.

The earthly love disillusioned, , , , , , , , , , yet asking for the love divine, Pia- it is beautiful, i love it, thanks for sharing

Quite an excellent poem. It speaks of a love lost and frenzy of mind. A cry for love and togetherness. Well done. Milda

God will help you, your friends will help you and i will send you a map to the Morvan Chrisx

lovely poem. keep writing