Saturday, June 25, 2011

White Nights Xv Put The Night On Fire Comments

Rating: 2.8

O languid yesterday,
Step into tomorrow's gloom,
Happiness is short lived,
I could not break the barriers
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 25 June 2011

Great poem. I loved the way you described the whole thing. The poem was written well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Best regards Akmal

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