Saturday, June 25, 2011

White Nights Iv Something Inspiring Comments

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This is the light that goes through and through
The night is evaporating eavesdropping
Finesse of the apparel, red of the lips
The milky sheen of the skins,
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Sadiqullah Khan 22 June 2012

There is history, culture, and comparson, probably of a lost oppertunity. History of a civilization, and the present status [fetching water from hill tops], the present, and thses are symbolically, demsels of the future, bringing present to the future. In other words they carry the same mystery, as they carried it in the past or present.

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Aisha Zulqarnain 21 June 2012

Hi Sir, I love reading poems of different genres.. I have been reading some of your poems... They R nice n inspiring.. I was juz reaing this poem of yours today and your 1st part of it was great... and coming towards the line which read...'the damsels of the future...' it seemed that all of a sudden the poem was redirected to a different path altogether.. I was juz wondering..is ter any reason? ? or was all about the damsels or ancient times? sorry for troubling u... :)

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