Tuesday, August 29, 2006

White Magic Comments

Rating: 5.0

Spring is dawning to a close,
the breeze is sometimes, cool
darkness falls faster,
now winter will begin its rule
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Arti Chopra
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Nalini Hebbar 29 August 2006

you have spun some magic here Arti...a very beautiful poem about life's truths...using the seasons as a means to explain them...great going...loved it...nalini

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Nick Percowycz 29 August 2006

God's great design! The stanza beginning with the line 'so when you are in winter....', is one of best I have ever read! ! ! This is absoltely a poem that ranks as one of the best! Magnificent, Arti! A ten. God bless you.

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