Wednesday, April 19, 2006

White Lines Comments

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White lines whiz past,
trying to shape my World.
They trap me on every side, closing me in.
They are sharp, strict and unbending,
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Dan Brown
innocence Leaving
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Brian Dorn 19 April 2006

Dan, nice symbolism! ! Rules should be allowed to bend... if not, they become broken. Brian

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Duncan Wyllie 19 April 2006

Brilliantly put, you have captured so much emotion in this, such a sad subject though, Thankyou for sharing your tallent, Love duncan

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Dan Brown

Dan Brown

Newcastle-Upon-Tyne, UK
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