White Leaves Comments

Service to parents forget children, In happiness they do sorrow rain....is this the right way of writing?

There is no indication after long if PH has taken my feedback...and I leave it at that.

Wonder, wonder is affection to dust, All should realize glory of God must. Awakening is only God's hand power White leaves can be green in top tower. A lovely concluding quatrain ending a great poem centred ariund glory of God, as usual.

White leaves are nice. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

Facing life! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Wonder, wonder is affection to dust, All should realize glory of God must. Awakening is only God's hand power White leaves can be green in top tower. Once again, a beautiful poem that speaks of the glory of God and the realisation of His greatness. Well crafted with attractive metaphors. A full vote, Sir!

picture of Lynda Robson xTender, loving write, thanks 12 Dec 2014 by Lynda Robson | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xbeautiful piece of work 16 Dec 2014 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xAn enchanting lovely piece full of beautiful flowing imagery. 21 Aug 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply Note: These comments are received through PF.