Friday, August 29, 2014

White House Comments

Rating: 5.0

Knowing couldn't resist the autumn light
playing on walls the shorter days
painted my house with only white
to forget coming winter's gloomy gray!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Valsa George 31 August 2014

On a white surface when shadows fall, they stand out and it is a beautiful sight! Nice that you painted your house all white! Enjoyed!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 29 August 2014

Very well crafted with loving words and nice illustration of lovely nature shining in metaphor.......very nice Pradipji..........

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Sd Tiwari 29 August 2014

Nicely penned. Good use of metaphor in the poem.

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