White Horse Comments

superb composition all through...the 'white horse' coming in the 'darkest need', the poem opens up with beautiful antithesis...you maintain the tempo in your write galloping till its end of ride...excellent work, Pablo...10+

what a superb poem sir.....I think this is your best...goes to my favs...10+

Pablo, in silence we might find each other, fighting thoughts and things. Being present always is the way. It is an intriguing poem with questions we all should ask. Excellent write, Greenwolf was right. Bob 10/10

Fantastic flow and message Pablo. I agree with Greenwolfe. You need more comments Mark

I can't believe this only has two comments. I just read a poem wih 47 comments that can't hold a candle to this one. This is one of the most finely written things that I have seen. You did a wonderful job. I'm going to vote for it. Perhaps that will encourage you to keep it on your list. GW62

Wicked write very poignant and moving thank you

reminds me of James Browns song on the same subject, the white horse of herion wil ride you to death, liked it smiffy