Friday, March 7, 2014

White Horse Comments

Rating: 4.3

Too long in my affliction...
Caught in a dream, in fiction;
In shame and in disdain,
And a madness of the brain.
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Hazel Durham 07 June 2018

The pain and hurt of a relationship breaking up is beautifully presented and that time can heal evantually! Passion is an emotion that bounces back as love is so powerful it reinvents itself!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2017

The velvet touch of joy, Rosy face in bloom and coy: So deeply and suave — The purity of love! ..... loved these lines. Purity of love comes after affliction, disdain and shame. Dear Pirjol, you have astutely painted this poem with nice penmanship. Beautiful poem.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 May 2016

The velvet touch of joy! ! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing.

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