White Hairs Comments

White hairs - you mean old age? Yes. If we haven't done anything real to the world, old age, nay, life itself can be a symbol of nothingness. Good idea being put in verses. Vestiges of pain - a sign of success and of fame. Both lines do not match together in my view. Pain, success and fame - all won't go together. Kindly check. Wish you best of luck with your pen in the years to come.