Sunday, August 19, 2018

White Fruit Juice And The Red Alcohol Comments

Rating: 5.0

The journey started from a familiar place,
Colorful faces of kind trees, red or white or pink,
Some with green leaves and aromatic flowers,
One hiding the juicy fruits for a lovely drink.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 August 2018

Typo... The fourth line of my comment should be read: Another brilliant write! . A truly wonderful offering for all mothers. On to my Poem List

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 August 2018

A very perceptive write. A great tribute to all mothers for their sacrifices. Liked the final stanza. Another brill! isn't write.10++++

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Savita Tyagi 20 August 2018

Wow! I could never guess the ending. It’s a lovely tribute to all mothers who so lovingly bring their children up. Thank you so much for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 20 August 2018

All 6 of my children were breast-fed, some til after 2 years old. The health benefits were only exceeded by the mother - child bond. I wish society didn't look upon it as anything other than beautiful.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 August 2018

A very insightful piece of work sir! Loved reading it.........10

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Rini Shibu 20 August 2018

Wonderful poem about mother child bond

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 August 2018

Colorful faces of kind trees we see in nature while the journey is started. Mother's face flashes first. Freshly starting road with friend is interesting. Sweetest love counters violence. A mother guides in right way and persons feel this. An amazing poem is shared...10

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