White Eyes Comments

I liked the title a lot and poem too........ Good write.........

Hi Anna - I am honoured to be the first to comment on this lovely poem and I have scored it a MAX (TEN) . When a child is born blind this is a great disadvantage in a very VISUAL WORLD. It can also be a disappointment to the parents and her family (Line 5) sometimes we can be very cruel to people with disabilities, Line One - Angels are generally invisible but when we do se them they are very beautiful. I love the suggestion that our little blind girl could see the Angel whereas those with physical sight could not. I like the last line because again she s comforted by the singing of the Angel who loves her. Love you in Poetry - JOHN