Saturday, March 15, 2008

White Elephant Comments

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It wasn’t my intention to hurt you,
I was just collecting things.
My cell phone, my job, my apartment,
the things that I so often left.
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Cosi Celeste
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Mary Gordley 18 March 2008

You have come up with an original metaphor and I find the poem you created with it very charming. Thanks so much, it is always fun to read something unique and fresh.

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