Sunday, April 4, 2010

White Dove Of Flight Comments

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White is the dove in flight
its wings beating slowly
towards the distance gleam
the light upon the shore
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Michael Brock
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Kolawole Ajao 18 April 2010

...And when the dove lands to rest, It brings a basketful of joy and peace.... Go on, Michael, go on. I love all your write.

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Sandra Fowler 07 April 2010

Very beautiful. I like to think of your dove as a white snowflake in a deep blue sky. Write on, by all means. Warm regards, Sandra

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Raj Nandy 06 April 2010

A well written poem! It was the dove which had brought a twig and aligted on Noah's Arc to announce that land was in sight! May your dove be the harbinger of PEACE! -Raj

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C. P. Sharma 04 April 2010

It sails upon the winds watching the land below In evergreens and oaks the dove lands to rest The beautiful extended perception of peaceful prosperity. CP

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